Dispatch 5
Sports-
Freshmen Dillion Alpert is a starter on varsity soccer and he helped the team a lot this season. Dillion won an award for being newcomer of the year for all his accomplishments on varsity soccer.
1. Dillion and the soccer coaches were quoted in this story
2. The quote where coach Mendoza said "He has a great soccer IQ [ and] a very good awareness of the game'. I thought that quote really spoke for itself and showed what a strong soccer player he is.
3. Yes it did, It was cool to see a freshmen make a varsity team.
4. The conclusion was a quote.
News-
Funding was lost due to the amount of absent seniors and students on march 15. Staff at bowie want students to appreciate their education and want them to come to school.
1. Assistant principal , a junior and senior student were quoted in this story.
2. The quote where junior student Clara Provenzi states " I think attendance is somewhat important but it doesn't represent your intelligence or academic ability". I thought this quote was very strong and really proved a good point.
3. Yes it did, the lead in this story made me want to know more about senior skip day and also to see how much money the school lost due to students being absent .
4. The conclusion was a quote.
Feature-
Senior silver stars captain Kristin Hauck talks about her dance journey and how being captain of the silver stars has impacted her life. Also Kristin talks about how busy life with dance is and how much time and energy dance takes up.
1. Kristin, Emily Davis ( her dance teacher) , junior Lieutenant Jade Fattouh were quoted in this story.
2. The quote where Kristin states " Being captain has impacted my life because it has allowed me to lead others and have an impact on them". I think this quote shows her character and how kind of a person she is.
3. The lead sentence was a good hook and it did make me want to read more.
4. The conclusion was a quote.
Commentary-
Teen depression is on the rise and sources prove that it's social media and the new music's fault for the rise of depression. Depression may be on the rise but there could be ways it's not continuing to grow as the years go on.
1. There are no quotes in this story just the writers opinions and facts.
2. There is no quote but the topic of this piece is really powerful and it's message is really big and important.
3. The lead sentence made me want to read more of the story and hear what the story is about.
4. The conclusion was a statement
In Depth-
Climate change is a really big issue going on right now in the world , sea levels are rising and and earths global temperature is on the rise. Many student's have different viewpoints on global warming and many people have different solutions that are hoping could make global warming go down.
1. Junior Cassie Gutierrez, Senior Adam Werchan , Freshmen Cross Lowder, Science teacher Ashley Spiro, City of Austin Manager Zach Baumer and Earth club president Morgan Scrimgeour .
2. The quote where junior Cassie Gutierrez states " It's known that the earth's global temperature has gone up. The sea levels have been rising because of ice caps melting, and there's evidence in the ecosystems that have been affected. There's things that you can't blame on anything other than climate change".
3. The lead sentence was very eye catching and made me want to read more.
4. The conclusion was a quote.
1.My favorite photo in the entire paper was the once of Kristin and her teammates lifting her up during a dance.
1A- it's my favorite picture because it shows teamwork and it shows passion in their faces.
2. My least favorite photo in the paper was the vaccine picture
2A- It's my least favorite because I just didn't really enjoy it and it didn't really grab my eyes like the other pictures did.
3. Either the story covering the silver star captain or the FFA story. i would love to take in action pictures of the dancers and also who wouldn't love to take pictures of cute animals. I would find both of those stories really fun to be involved in.
4. The photography in this issue was really strong and eye catching, every story that had a picture was really well done and every picture looked like effort had been put into it.
1. I really liked reading the story about the freshmen soccer player who made varsity his freshmen year.
1A- It was my favorite photo to read because i know him and it was cool to read a story about him and his accomplishments this year.
2- My least favorite story to read was the story about the On Ramps classes
2A- It was my least favorite because i just didn't have any connection with the story and it didn't really catch my eye when i was looking through the paper.
3- One idea you could do for issue six could be talking about everything that had happened to bowie this year and also you could talk about all the colleges student's at bowie are going to.
Freshmen Dillion Alpert is a starter on varsity soccer and he helped the team a lot this season. Dillion won an award for being newcomer of the year for all his accomplishments on varsity soccer.
1. Dillion and the soccer coaches were quoted in this story
2. The quote where coach Mendoza said "He has a great soccer IQ [ and] a very good awareness of the game'. I thought that quote really spoke for itself and showed what a strong soccer player he is.
3. Yes it did, It was cool to see a freshmen make a varsity team.
4. The conclusion was a quote.
News-
Funding was lost due to the amount of absent seniors and students on march 15. Staff at bowie want students to appreciate their education and want them to come to school.
1. Assistant principal , a junior and senior student were quoted in this story.
2. The quote where junior student Clara Provenzi states " I think attendance is somewhat important but it doesn't represent your intelligence or academic ability". I thought this quote was very strong and really proved a good point.
3. Yes it did, the lead in this story made me want to know more about senior skip day and also to see how much money the school lost due to students being absent .
4. The conclusion was a quote.
Feature-
Senior silver stars captain Kristin Hauck talks about her dance journey and how being captain of the silver stars has impacted her life. Also Kristin talks about how busy life with dance is and how much time and energy dance takes up.
1. Kristin, Emily Davis ( her dance teacher) , junior Lieutenant Jade Fattouh were quoted in this story.
2. The quote where Kristin states " Being captain has impacted my life because it has allowed me to lead others and have an impact on them". I think this quote shows her character and how kind of a person she is.
3. The lead sentence was a good hook and it did make me want to read more.
4. The conclusion was a quote.
Commentary-
Teen depression is on the rise and sources prove that it's social media and the new music's fault for the rise of depression. Depression may be on the rise but there could be ways it's not continuing to grow as the years go on.
1. There are no quotes in this story just the writers opinions and facts.
2. There is no quote but the topic of this piece is really powerful and it's message is really big and important.
3. The lead sentence made me want to read more of the story and hear what the story is about.
4. The conclusion was a statement
In Depth-
Climate change is a really big issue going on right now in the world , sea levels are rising and and earths global temperature is on the rise. Many student's have different viewpoints on global warming and many people have different solutions that are hoping could make global warming go down.
1. Junior Cassie Gutierrez, Senior Adam Werchan , Freshmen Cross Lowder, Science teacher Ashley Spiro, City of Austin Manager Zach Baumer and Earth club president Morgan Scrimgeour .
2. The quote where junior Cassie Gutierrez states " It's known that the earth's global temperature has gone up. The sea levels have been rising because of ice caps melting, and there's evidence in the ecosystems that have been affected. There's things that you can't blame on anything other than climate change".
3. The lead sentence was very eye catching and made me want to read more.
4. The conclusion was a quote.
1.My favorite photo in the entire paper was the once of Kristin and her teammates lifting her up during a dance.
1A- it's my favorite picture because it shows teamwork and it shows passion in their faces.
2. My least favorite photo in the paper was the vaccine picture
2A- It's my least favorite because I just didn't really enjoy it and it didn't really grab my eyes like the other pictures did.
3. Either the story covering the silver star captain or the FFA story. i would love to take in action pictures of the dancers and also who wouldn't love to take pictures of cute animals. I would find both of those stories really fun to be involved in.
4. The photography in this issue was really strong and eye catching, every story that had a picture was really well done and every picture looked like effort had been put into it.
1. I really liked reading the story about the freshmen soccer player who made varsity his freshmen year.
1A- It was my favorite photo to read because i know him and it was cool to read a story about him and his accomplishments this year.
2- My least favorite story to read was the story about the On Ramps classes
2A- It was my least favorite because i just didn't have any connection with the story and it didn't really catch my eye when i was looking through the paper.
3- One idea you could do for issue six could be talking about everything that had happened to bowie this year and also you could talk about all the colleges student's at bowie are going to.
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